Please sign up
or login to post a critique.
'MSA-2' Chapter 4Chpater 4"Welcome to Droirusai"-.Heh, it haven't changed at all in this year, isn't?; said Wario.-.No, it haven't; replied Yoshi.-.Wow, it looks beautiful; said Mari.-.Please, be careful with the things here, there really old and very delicate; said Toadsworth-.Ok, we are on the sanctuary, now what do we do?; asked Drew.-.I'm not pretty sure; said Mario confused.-.What do you mean you're not sure?, I thought you knew how; said Mari.-.Yes, he knows how to transport us anywhere we have to go; argued Luigi.-.We should start to look for some kind of door in here; argued Bowser.-.Wait, what's that on the wall?; said Peach.Mario went directly to the wall and found a slot, a circled shaped slot, he tried to figure out the pattern between them, until...-.I got it!!!; This medallion is the key of the sanctuary, and the slot is the lock on the wall, so this wall is the door to enter Droirusai, if I put the medallion into the slot, it will open and we'll be able to enter; said Mario.
'MSA-2' Chapter 3Chapter 3"The arrival of old friends"Knock, Knock, Knock!!!!-.Who's outside?; asked Yoshi.-.Maybe it's them again and they know we are here and are going to attack us again; said Waluigi.-.I'm not sure, they wouldn't knocked to enter, I'll go and check out; replied Mario.Mario went to open the door, outside appeared Drew and Mari, they are Mario, Luigi and Peach's old friends, they help them to rescue Drew's Girlfriend and Mari's Cousin form two Bowser's nephews long ago.-.Hello Mario, how are you?; asked Mari to Mario.-.We figured out what happened on your weeding and came here to see you and know what happened, said Drew.-.Oh hey guys, we are good, wanna come in?; asked Mario.-.Sure, said Mari-.Sure, why not; said Drew.And both entered the E.Gadd's Lab and met up with everyone inside.-.Hello everybody; said Drew.-.Hello, how's everyone doin'?; said Mari.-.Hey you guys; said Luigi.-.Hello, I'm so glad to see you again; said Peach.-.How have you been since the last tim
'MSA-2' Chapter 2Chapter 2"The Apocalyptic Warriors"And so, Mario and the others left the lab and went home, awaitng the call of the professor while healing their wounds of that fatidic day. A week later of the favor our heroes asked to E.Gadd., the phone rang inside Mario and Luigi's house, everyone were there, but Peach was the one who answered the phone, it was the Professor.-.Hello?; asked Peach.-.Your majesty, I'm so glad I could found you, I need to talk with Mario, it's really important; said E.Gadd.-.Mario, honey, it's the professor, he wants to talk with you, said Peach.Peach gave the phone to Mario.-.What is it doc?; asked Mario.-.I have discovered the needed information about the generals and why they are here, I need you and the others at my lab in an hour, can you be there?; said E.Gadd.-.No problem, we'll be goin' at this moment; responded Mario.And so everyone went to the E.Gadd's Lab and the professor was seated on his desk, awaiting for Mario and his friends to come.-.We are